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This pain cuts through my heart like a blinding flash of lightning

Let me wallow in my sadness,

Let me get lost in my despair

All this pain that cuts through my heart like a blinding flash of lightning,

All this havoc in my mind like a twirling tornado

And yet faith shines eternally within me and I know that when the raging storm passes, my ocean will be calm again

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30 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. BreakawayIndividual
    May 31, 2019 @ 19:57:23

    Love this piece, amazing. Hang in there! Make sure to keep on keeping on.

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  2. Manoj Mehra
    May 31, 2019 @ 20:02:37

    I can feel this pain. Faced so many failures in life but a little hope is inside me that things will change.

    Read my blog ‘To die is easy, to live is hard’!
    https://believestrong.wordpress.com/2019/03/22/to-die-is-easy-to-live-is-hard/

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  3. map195
    May 31, 2019 @ 20:03:04

    fantastic

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  4. righteousbruin9
    May 31, 2019 @ 20:43:04

    Dear friend, you have every right to all of your feelings and to let them flow out, as YOU see fit. May the calm return, richly.

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  5. windsofchange18
    May 31, 2019 @ 21:32:09

    I felt every word.☺

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  6. Jonathan Caswell
    May 31, 2019 @ 23:10:20

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    LIKE THE APOSTLE PETER! GREAT POEM!!!!

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  7. Ancient Skies
    Jun 01, 2019 @ 00:12:28

    May you continue to find peace and be blessed.

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  8. beyondsadblog
    Jun 01, 2019 @ 02:50:08

    Wow. Beautiful.

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  9. stevenannie
    Jun 01, 2019 @ 05:28:01

    Hang in there… Peace will come after the storm.

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  10. benjaminlee
    Jun 01, 2019 @ 15:49:49

    Be still

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  11. Kathy of London
    Jun 01, 2019 @ 16:01:34

    This is a good illustration of what it is like to go through trauma and grief. Sometimes the storms come back through the years. The hope is in accepting it passes eventually and not giving up. Thanks for beautifully describing this.

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  12. ayansolaibukun
    Jun 01, 2019 @ 17:50:50

    First you admit to the presence of a pain. But then you won’t let it tear you apart. Rather, you are positive of overcoming it.

    Instructive!

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  13. pick1solution
    Jun 01, 2019 @ 19:06:59

    This is a nice reflection of what we all go through.

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  14. bigskybuckeye
    Jun 01, 2019 @ 20:33:27

    Beautifully written! I appreciated reading your special poem.

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